My Explain Writing Sample

This is my Explain Writing Sample.
In our Tautoro School community. We have no where to learn our music.
And we are not learning our instruments
It is just a waste of money getting the instruments.
It is just a waste of instruments. So the facility that is needed is a music room.
Why is a music room needed by our Tautoro school community?
First a music room is needed so that some people do not break our instruments.
Second a music room is needed so that we don't dump our instruments everywhere.
 Lastly a music room is needed so that our instruments will be looked after.
 So in conclusion these are the reason why a music room is needed by our Tautoro School community.